Final Piece

Audience Feedback.

Conclusions.
From looking at our audience feedback we found that we should of subverted more from the thriller genre and made it less apparent to what the killers intensions were, we could of done this at the end of our opening by not having the killer walking out the house with the knife in hand. This would of helped to leave the viewers in suspense at the end of watching our opening. We also found that another way that we could of improved the tension of our film could of been by giving the snakes less prevalence,  By doing this the we would of been able to focus more on the killer and the girl so the story line could of been made more clear for the viewers, it would also help the viewers to build relationships that they could relate to.

Planning of our final piece

Call Sheet

In order to remain organised with timings, something we found difficult with the preliminary task we created a call sheet in order to help us be more organised. 

                                                                       Storyboard
We created storyboards to help give us an idea of what shots we were going to do, this would help us save time when filming as we would already know what we were doing. We decided to give more time to this aspect of the planning of our film as we found ourselves to have rused it in the prelinmary task which meant we made small mistakes.