Cover work- storyboard

My storyboard was about a rabbit crossing the road in order to get a carrot however this carrot ends up get crushed by a car speeding down the road.

My first shot was of a rabbit at the side of the road, my next shot was then of a old man crossing the road with a handfull of carrots. He then drops one and so the next shot is of a rabbit eating the carrot. The next shot shows a car coming towards the rabbit. The rabbit then runs away in the next shit. The car driving away is then showed in the next shot, and the squashed carrot in the last shot.